KING MIDAS AND HIS TOUCH!
Positive Feedback
In my performance of my first draft of my storytelling performance I was able to add elements of each scene.
I had a true sense of connection with the audience while performing, which showed a great technique of being able to switch off the narrative to the character at any moment of time.
I put in a good variety of dramatic effect during the climax section where king Midas kneels down and cries to the Lord for his curse from his hand to be removed, I changed the tone of my voice and I had tearful eyes.
Good arch of the story telling.
I used good sound effects such as a 'stamp' 'tick tock tick tock'
Vocal phonation
Repetition of words in different pitches 'gold, gold, gold'
I had a good understanding of taking the audience into a emotional journey.
Negative Feedback
I used too much spacing, which needs to be thought through about as I need to be able of each performance space I will be having.
For a more high classed character for example for the God I need to put in a speech he would say before he removes the curse from the king.
Introduce the king's daughter as she enters the room with confusion as to why her father was crying, before she actually turns into gold.
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